''Oh no I am going to get hit by a heavy bowling ball!!!My life is ruined.''I said to myself. I can see a stranger picking up the big fat bowling ball,carrying it to the game area, because he is switching it for another one. The other pins are excited to be knocked down especially if they are next to the gutter .''I HATE IT. This is the WORST JOB EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!''I yelled.
The man raised his right arm and threw the ball at me and he got a strike, all ten pins down,INCLUDING ME!!!!!
''My head hurts so badly.'' I cried.
The sweeper sweeps me up and puts my sisters in. They start screaming with excitement.
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Kia Ora Shoal,
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story to read because of the way you wrote yourself as the bowling pin. I think that's a great idea and you are very clever. Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing what else you post on your blog. Great job.
Miss Lavakula
Hi Shoal,
ReplyDeleteThat would be the worst job wouldn't it- getting knocked dwon all the time. i think I would much rather be the bowling ball. Anyway nice writing. I hope you can get your picnic story published this term too because I thought youdid a really great job with that piece of writing as well. Keep up the great blogging.
Ms Squires
What a fantastic story Shoal! It took me a little while to realise that you were writing from the point of view of a bowling pin (I must be getting old!) How clever of you. Your writing was very interesting to read. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMrs Lagitupu
p.s. I thought you were writing about your experience at camp....luckily it wasn't!
Hi Shoal
ReplyDeleteMummy here again hehe Like Mrs Lagitupu took me awhile too to realise you were a bowling ball haha and i also thought you were talking about that time you went bowling at camp and you got a strike. Well done my girl for your creative writing. Looking forward to hearing more of your stories.
♥ Mummy and your babysister Cree ♥
Ok mum got it wrong, you were a bowling pin! cool story shoal.
ReplyDelete♥ Dad
Hi Shoalee, WOW i love the idea that you've written your story from a different point of view. GREAT STUFF!! Keep up the great work and keep making us proud!
ReplyDeleteFrom you family in Brisbane xoxoxo
Hey shoal you done a good aspect of being the bowling PIN...and reading it was like realistic!!! you've done good look forward to reading more of your fantastic stories Keep it up:> U ROCK!!!!!!!...luv ya fortune Leanne Oushen xxxxx
ReplyDeleteWow Shoal awesome blogging...you are totally talented...keep up the awesome work and I look forward to reading more of your blogs......
ReplyDeleteLove ya Aunty Toa from Sydney Australia..xox