That was an interesting watch and very informative story about how the Treaty of Waitangi was signed. Very interesting and great to know you studied The Treaty of Waitangi. A lot of trading went on in those days ie blankets and muskets for land. Our Government is slowly giving back these land to our Maori people and hopefully things will be resolved in the future. Great work my girl.
Love your work Shoal You've got some excellent stuff here. I loved seeing your creativity and your writing improving. Nice to see you back at school for term 2.
I think what i could of done better is trying not to look like i was reading the script and try to make something move like the men on the Waka. More details on the Waka and the Island. My voice over could be better too.The thing I think I did really well was writiing my script.Next time i"m Going to try do my voice over more clear.
Hi! My name is Shoal and I'm 12 years old and I am a year 8 in room 21 at Pt England School. My name is Shoal because there is a place called Shoal Bay. That is where my mum, Mel and dad, Tony went on their first date at the bay. I have two sisters and one on the way. Khaia, shes 8 and Cree is 3. My favourite fruits are mango's, bananas and oranges. My favourite T.V shows are bones, C.S.I: New York and Glee. I love kebabs, especially honey soy chicken. I like the colours black and yellow.
Hello Justice Kendall ( Shoalee )
ReplyDeleteThat was an interesting watch and very informative story about how the Treaty of Waitangi was signed. Very interesting and great to know you studied The Treaty of Waitangi. A lot of trading went on in those days ie blankets and muskets for land. Our Government is slowly giving back these land to our Maori people and hopefully things will be resolved in the future. Great work my girl.
❤❦ mummy ❀✿
Love your work Shoal
ReplyDeleteYou've got some excellent stuff here. I loved seeing your creativity and your writing improving. Nice to see you back at school for term 2.
I think what i could of done better is trying not to look like i was reading the script and try to make something move like the men on the Waka. More details on the Waka and the Island. My voice over could be better too.The thing I think I did really well was writiing my script.Next time i"m Going to try do my voice over more clear.
ReplyDeleteBUT YOU DID WELL MY GIRL KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB!!
ReplyDeleteLuv mum and dad xo