This is a record of my learning during my time at Pt England School.
Friday, June 15, 2012
Features of a Narrative
He triples in size if you anger him. His pale skin turns green in almost an instant. he turns into the mighty hulk! At first the government thought of him as a threat to society, but now use him as a weapon to fight crime all over the nation. His black hair almost covers his bright green eyes.
What an effective description!! It is powerful and for me as the reader, gives a strong message about the Hulk as a character. Next time, you should give more detail about your character.
Hi! My name is Shoal and I'm 12 years old and I am a year 8 in room 21 at Pt England School. My name is Shoal because there is a place called Shoal Bay. That is where my mum, Mel and dad, Tony went on their first date at the bay. I have two sisters and one on the way. Khaia, shes 8 and Cree is 3. My favourite fruits are mango's, bananas and oranges. My favourite T.V shows are bones, C.S.I: New York and Glee. I love kebabs, especially honey soy chicken. I like the colours black and yellow.
Hi Shoal,
ReplyDeleteWhat an effective description!! It is powerful and for me as the reader, gives a strong message about the Hulk as a character. Next time, you should give more detail about your character.