Friday, June 15, 2012

Features of a Narrative







He triples in size if you anger him. His pale skin turns green in almost an instant. he turns into the mighty hulk! At first the government thought of him as a threat to society, but now use him as a weapon to fight crime all over the nation. His black hair almost covers his bright green eyes.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shoal,

    What an effective description!! It is powerful and for me as the reader, gives a strong message about the Hulk as a character. Next time, you should give more detail about your character.

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